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As your fingers tucked a yellow flower behind my ear,
We swayed underneath the starlight.
And the currents of the music, they swept us away,
To heaven and beyond.

It's so hypnotic,
To be here in your arms tonight.
The band's playing loud and the crowd's a roar,
But the biggest rush is my heart
Beating so close to yours.

And as the chords floated softly into the night,
I swear the music never sounded sweeter,
Than with the steady beat of your breathing in my ear.
Dance with me,
Dance with me.

Because it's so hypnotic to be in your arms tonight.
You, me, together in the fading light.
The band's playing loud and the crowd's a roar,
But the biggest rush is my heart
Beating so close to yours.
©2008-2009 ~SecretValentine8
:iconsecretvalentine8:

Author's Comments

Ever been to an outdoor concert when the sun is just setting and everything's bathed in an orange glow from light on the horizon? When the stars are just beginning to twinkle in the violet sky? When the grass is a deep green, soft and cold under your feet? And the music is colliding with your own breathing? It's cosmic, but even better shared with someone else.

This poem is old, real old. It's a fixer uper. Give me some time I'm a busy chaquita.

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